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🌫 Till Eternity… 🏝🏞


Till Eternity…
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Till Eternity… is a song composed in an orchestral style or medium by SoundEagle🦅, though there is yet any plan to record the song with a singer.

Listening for the main melody and reading the lyrics, one can quickly see that the lyrics always maps to the music by one syllable per musical note of the melody.

The full lyrics is provided below, but only partial music (up to “I reach out for your hand” in Verse 2) is available via the SoundCloud audio player as follows.

The later verses, chorus and bridge can all be sung over the partial music since they are either (nearly) identical to, or different from but syllabically matching, their earlier counterparts.


Alternative lyrics of different styles or subject matters are entirely possible and welcome. In addition, many interpretations of the music and lyrics are permissible. Here is a possible scenario:

The central idea is about a woman walking in the sunset in her wedding dress, reminiscing of her beloved who has passed away.

In the subsequent process of reflection and transformation, she draws on her inner strength and eventually transcends her grief and loss.

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I wonder through the years
In search of someone I miss
Waiting in the meadow
I remember your kiss

Verse 1 0:18 — 1:01

I wonder through the years
In search of someone I miss
Walking by the seashore
I remember your kiss
You have given me all I asked for
Wish you were here
To hold me one more time
Till eternity . . . . . .

Chorus 1:02 — 1:31

You sent me one bouquet
Every time I cried
Time can’t take away
My love for you
All my life I have tried
To be one with you . . . . . .

Bridge 1 1:32 — 2:01

. . . . . . More than a dream
Till eternity . . . . . .
How much I feel for you
How much I dream of you
If you could be here now . . . . . .

Verse 2 2:02 — 2:45

The morning tide has gone
So has my castle of sand
Looking far at the sea
I reach out for your hand
Somewhere beyond reach you’ll wait for me
Wish I were there
To kiss you one more time
Till eternity . . . . . .

Chorus 2:46 — 3:14

You sent me one bouquet
Every time I cried
Time can’t take away
My love for you
All my life I have tried
To be one with you . . . . . .

Bridge 2 3:15 — 3:44

. . . . . . More than a dream
Till eternity . . . . . .
Where our chances dawn
The sunset lingers on
If you could be here now . . . . . .

Verse 3 3:45 — 4:26

One day I’ll join the sea
In search of you just once more
Sail by instinct of love
I’ll give my last encore
You have given me all stars above
Wish you and I
Could hold and kiss once more
Till Eternity . . . . . .

Till Eternity…

Retrospectively submitted as a response to Discover Challenge: Song and Weekly Writing Challenge: Moved by Music

38 comments on “🌫 Till Eternity… 🏝🏞

  1. Beautiful.

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  2. Hi SoundEagle, it s wonderful to see your original material presented here so completely (I mean with sound, text and image ie: a romantic, sentimental orchestral arrangement of your song, the complete lyrics and the graphic). I particularly like the calligraphy in the graphic above the song (the huge red Chinese letter for “Eternity”) … Thank you for posting all of this and giving all of us perpetual access to it! Best Wishes… Turtle

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    • Thank you, SeaTurtle.
      May this song bring you eternal love and truth
      Till Eternity…

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      永 永遠 永存 永恆
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      • Hello SoundEagle,
        Thank you for thinking of me, and for liking my post after 4 years. I hope that you and your family are well.

        What do the Chinese characters in your pink box above mean?

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      • Hello SeaTurtle,

        永, 永遠, 永存 and 永恆 all means eternal or forever.

        Yes, it has been quite a long time, and many newer posts have been published on this website since. More are forthcoming.

        May 2017 bring you fulfilment and contentment in life!

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  3. How really lovely this is .Sometimes it’s a let down when I click on some ones link but certainly not here 🙂

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  6. Oh Soundeagle this piece of music you have written “Till Eternity” is very beautiful, I could listen to it for hours. Such sweet, longing and romantic lyrics too. I loved it! Thank you for sharing this with us all. Best wishes Barbara.

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  9. Just wow! You have such a romantic pen!

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  10. Your works are very vibrant and peaceful together as one thank you for this piece too

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  11. Lovely lyrics, SoundEagle. ❤

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  12. None of us know how long we have here. We all stand on the cusp of eternity. ❤

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  13. Some grief stays w/ us. I return to your blog again and again, SoundEagle, and find different meanings. ❤

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  14. Love this sound eagle… your lyrics are beautiful and your music exquisite. Love that poem I hope to see more short enteries like this in the future. You have so many you could repost one every week so everyone can see you brilliant composures and songs. Your music is so healing

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  15. Dear SoundEagle 🦅,

    Till Eternity…, no other song can compare to this one .From today it will be my favorite song and I will come back to it an infinite number of times. I felt that my wife was listening to this extremely beautiful moving music and reading its equally beautiful and touching heart and soul words with me.I felt her presence so strongly … .Your talent is so huge. For me, this song is an absolute sensation.It is full of emotions, feelings, love, spirituality, beauty, power, connection, I could list its virtues endlessly.My head was full of memories, my eyes cried with emotion, my soul felt the extremely close presence of my wife living in heaven. SoundEagle- my dearest friend, this is how you can move the human (and furry, also lynx) soul and heart.I am immensely grateful to you for inviting me to listen to your miraculous, glorious and stunning musical composition.I am immensely proud of our friendship.
    Best wishes!

    Yours sincerely,
    Polski Ryś

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    • Dear Polski Ryś

      Given that Till Eternity… has become your favourite song and music, SoundEagle🦅 looks forward to receiving your detailed feedback on all of the recent improvements imparted to this post, and to finding out how such improvements have further contributed to your relationship with and your feelings towards the song and music.

      Till Eternity…

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      • Dear SoundEagle 🦅,

        Of course, I remember about my detailed feedback. I just work from dawn to dawn right now to catch up with my work. Hope it doesn’t take the rest of my life (I’m kidding right now😁 but maybe it isn’t a joke because I really work from dawn to dawn and I have been living at my job for several days.Don’t worry, I will write my impressions in detail. I don’t know when but I promise.
        Stay well and safe , my Dearest and Most Wonderful friend.

        Best wishes!

        Yours sincerely,
        Polski Ryś

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  16. Dear SoundEagle 🦅,
    my dearest friend. I listened to your tmusical composition “Till Eternity” many times. It’s my favorite song and music. I love it! My soul feel my wife’s presence so strongly when I listen to your music. A lot of so wonderful and so beautiful memories. I’m extremely grateful to you. And I invite you to see my new furry art and listen to “Husky”- music that is made by me.
    Here is the link:
    https://polskirys.art.blog/2021/05/30/ksiaze-igloo-prince-igloo/

    Have a wonderful day!
    Best wishes!
    Yours sincerely,
    Polski Ryś

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    • Dear Polski Ryś

      Thank you for your first foray into composing music to be enjoyed and critiqued by SoundEagle🦅, who is delighted that Till Eternity… has inspired you to a flurry of music making. In return for your enthusiasm, SoundEagle🦅 has not only improved and revamped this post but also provided the following guidelines for you to improve your music.

      Your first attempt shows that you have a good ear for timbral gesture with the use of certain piquant sound effects. The gradual layering of different instruments is also effective.

      In general, SoundEagle🦅 appreciates tracks showing good flair in using rhythmic, timbral, panning and other layering elements, which you have demonstrated in your music titled “Husky”. There is much room for improvement to make your use of those elements more sophisticated.

      However, SoundEagle🦅 would appreciate your musical compositions even more if they had included the use of longer and more varied phrases as well as stronger melodic and harmonic devices and variations, so that they are not as repetitive in their thematic materials and structures. It can pay great dividend when their rhythmic funkiness and harmonic piquancy are even more extended and sophisticated.

      SoundEagle🦅 would like to wish you all the pleasure of experimenting and discovering in your endeavours in creating music and digital art.

      See also SoundEagle🦅’s critique and additional advice for you on composing music in your next post entitled “Zdziwienie psa, czyli UFO jak kapelusz/ The surprise of the dog, i.e. the hat-shaped UFO”.

      Till Eternity…

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  17. SoundEagle, does the link to my music work?

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  18. Dear SoundEagle 🦅,

    Here you can see my new furry art (I know, this art is strange) and listen to my new musical composition:
    https://polskirys.art.blog/2021/05/30/zdziwienie-psa-czyli-ufo-jak-kapelusz-the-surprise-of-the-dog-i-e-the-hat-shaped-ufo/

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    • Dear Polski Ryś

      SoundEagle🦅 has listened to “UFO w zbożu (UFO in the wheat)” and found it satisfactory and soothing in its own way.

      Compositionally, it is simpler than “Husky”. To prevent your music from sounding too repetitive, you can introduce a more contrasting middle section. Also, the music can benefit from the infusion of one or two more interesting or adventurous harmonic progressions rather than just oscillating between two chords and repeating the same melodic fragment. This will also necessitate a much longer melody.

      You can learn about more varied and advanced chords at the following webpages:

      SoundEagle🦅’s advice for you regarding starting and structuring any new composition is to work out the overall form with two or more sections comprising a series of chord progressions that combine in a certain way to convey a sense of journey and drama in your music from start to finish.

      In composing any musical piece, you should aim for a good chord progression within each section, which should be at least 8 bars in length. 16 is even better.

      The form of your musical piece may have more than one section, such as ABA. Of course, you can repeat certain section(s), such as AABA, AABAA, ABABA, AABACA, ABACAB and so on.

      Remember that each section of your musical piece needs to have its own chord progression lasting at least 8 bars or more.

      Then there are also the key(s) and modulations(s) to consider.

      Thank you once again for sharing your musical composition with SoundEagle🦅.

      Till Eternity…

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  19. Dearest SoundEagle 🦅,

    Why Till Eternity… has become my favorite song and music? Because when I listen to it, memories come back to me. Memories of all the wonderful years I spent with my wife who lived on earth before.From the day I met her until now. I will never forget her, I will never stop loving her.Even though death has taken my beloved wife, I can feel her presence, I feel that she is with me.Although I cannot see her, I know that she accompanies me every day. When I listen, read and sing Till Eternity, I feel her presence as strongly as if she too is listening, reading and singing your song.
    And this song and music are full of beauty, love, memories. Eternity… yes she lives in eternity (and I love her till eternity, forever). I will always love her.This music is also my favorite because of its melody.A melody that touches me and makes three kinds of tears flow from my eyes: longing, emotion and happiness. Happiness because of the feeling of an extremely strong presence and, at the same time, of being close to my wife. But not only. Also happiness from being able to listen to this mystical, beautiful and perfect melody.The lyrics of the song are also so beautiful and gorgeous. It’s so great to admire your enormous talent, SoundEagle 🦅.You are the best music expert. I’m full of the greatest admiration, my dearest friend. You’re also my teacher. I’ve never heard a song more beautiful than this one.Every time I listen to it, I’m more and more amazed.The best musical composition by far!
    Thank you so very much, SoundEagle 🦅. You’re supremely talented.
    Best wishes!

    Yours sincerely,
    Polski Ryś

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    • Dear Polski Ryś

      Your ability to articulate your eternal love for your late wife in relation to your fervent reminiscing about those wonderful times that you spent with her vividly conveys the earnestness and depth of your lasting memories and everlasting devotions.

      SoundEagle🦅 is immensely touched and honoured that Till Eternity… has been able to distil your deep affection and profound ardour into a song encapsulating your lachrymose “longing, emotion and happiness”.

      You have indeed given SoundEagle🦅 a very compelling reason to set the entire song into a five-minute video later in the year, should time permit. The quality of the video will be comparable to that of the following song, which SoundEagle🦅 used to play on the electronic organ, and which is presented and dedicated to you here:

      Till Eternity…

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  20. Dear SoundEagle 🦅,
    It’s tribute to my wife:
    https://polskirys.art.blog/2021/06/15/w-moich-myslach-pojawilo-sie-wspomnienie-a-memory-flashed-through-my-mind/
    Accept my invitation, my dearest friend.

    Yours sincerely,
    Polski Ryś

    P.S. You probably expected to find me here again. I’m here everyday.

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  21. Very lovely lyrics. A bit sad, but sweet at the same time to think of a love that lasts through eternity. ❤

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